Preliminary exercise learner response

1) Mr Halsey's comments

  • Export settings/timeline (widescreen).
  • Superb audio
  • Excellent framing and editing...pacing is perfect
  • Superb performance from main protagonist- very helpful
  • Focus- eyes close up a great shot but not quite in focus
  • Genre clearly communicated- this is close to professional standards.
2) WWW
  • Great choice of casting which is very helpful
  • Audio choice is superb, sets the tone.
  • Genre clearly communicated- close to professional standards
EBI
  • Close up of the eye wasn't in focus.
  • Need to make it widescreen
  • Lighting at some points.
3) I effectively completed the objective I stated in my mini SOI, the casting was well selected and the narrative was clearly communicated as well as the genre, the mise-en-scene and representations was well established.

4) For my actual coursework I will make sure that all my shots are focused and clear, otherwise I will re-shoot. I will also make use of lighting more effectively. Additionally, make sure that it is widescreen. 

5) I won't make any major changes, I will be keeping my narrative the same. It will just be a case of making sure my technical aspects, such as the focus is on point, so re-shooting if I need to. 

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