Preliminary exercise learner response
1) Mr Halsey's comments Export settings/timeline (widescreen). Superb audio Excellent framing and editing...pacing is perfect Superb performance from main protagonist- very helpful Focus- eyes close up a great shot but not quite in focus Genre clearly communicated- this is close to professional standards. 2) WWW Great choice of casting which is very helpful Audio choice is superb, sets the tone. Genre clearly communicated- close to professional standards EBI Close up of the eye wasn't in focus. Need to make it widescreen Lighting at some points. 3) I effectively completed the objective I stated in my mini SOI, the casting was well selected and the narrative was clearly communicated as well as the genre, the mise-en-scene and representations was well established. 4) For my actual coursework I will make sure that all my shots are focused and clear, otherwise I will re-shoot. I will also make use of lighting more effectively. Additionally, make sur...