Cinematography video feedback and learner response

1) My video:

2) Mr Halsey's feedback- 
  • Very effective response with a nice selection of shots and angles. The focus pull is excellent (and very difficult to do well- and yours is spot on!)
  • One shot incorrectly titled- the XCU was a CU.
  • They key EBI is framing- think about the composition of your shots for future porjects to aim for A/A*.
3) Class feedback-

WWW: Good range of camera shots used. Nice music
EBI: Extreme close up was a close up.
WWW:Great lighting, shots and music.
EBI: Nothing
WWW: Good camera angles and clear movement and shots.
EBI: Nothing.
WWW: Variety of shots, music went very well with video, good quality.
EBI: Extreme close up was not done correctly.
WWW: Good variety of shots and framing of shots (especially the focus pull).
EBI: Nothing.
WWW: Very good music, completed all shots!
EBI: Nothing.
WWW: Good focus shot. Perfect cinematography video.
EBI: When zooming in try and make it a bot clearer.
WWW: Amazing video!
EBI: The label-' extreme close up' 

4) My Reflection:
  • WWW: Great focus pull.
  • WWW:I filmed a range of shots- correctly done.
  • WWW:Music went well with setting/camera angles.
  • EBI: The video could have been longer.
  • EBI: Tighter framing for A/A*
  • EBI: One shot labelled incorrectly
5) Learner Response:

There are many things that I will do differently next time, such as making sure that my framing is tighter and accurate in order to push myself to an A/A* grade,  I will keep taking the shots until they are perfect. I could maybe do a narrative video, this is because they are quite engaging and you can use a variety of shots and it will be entertaining. I really want to get a reaction from the audience. I will also include more shots. I will also keep working on my focus pull, even though it was perfect! Overall, I just need to make sure that the shots are in better framing so that the quality of my work is at a high standard. 
 

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