'Statement of Intent' feedback
Comments on Statement of Intent: · There is a good, well thought-out idea here but you perhaps need to consider if it is definitely appropriate for a family audience. You also need to put a few more details at the beginning – title, confirmed TV channel etc. (ITV and C4 are quite different!) · Clearly well-planned in terms of trailer structure but you need more in terms of specific shots, sound, mise-en-scene – media language. Be specific: what meanings do you plan to create for the audience? · Would a BAME cast help attract a wider audience? Certainly more diverse. This aspect may also link to the channel you select to broadcast it. · Try and add some theory to the statement. On that subject, I’m not sure the male/female gaze section works. · ...